Quote Rephrase

 According to Marc Riemer, Faculty of Engineering, Monash University,

Picking up communication skills as an engineering student prepares them not only for their education but for their future careers as well.

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  1. Brad BlackstoneSeptember 1, 2022 at 3:34 AM

    Thanks, Tim, for being one of the first to create your blog and to post the paraphrase! (You can combine this info, please.)

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